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This week’s initial Discussion Board posts come from two chapters, i.e., chapters 10 and 12. First, go to Chapter 10 and review pages 243-246. Select any one (1) exercise and complete it. Be sure to copy the exercise and the rewritten, corrected sentences.
Chapter 12’s assignment is an adaptation of Exercise 2 on page 333. In short, you need to design a flowchart for a process you are familiar with, such as applying for a summer job, studying for a test, preparing a paper, cooking a recipe, or performing some task at work. Your audience is someone who will be carrying out the process.
This is the example for chapter 10
2. Referring to the advice on page 216, rewrite each of the following sentences to eliminate comma splices.mandefro_flowchart.docxmandefro_flowchart.pdf
Splice:
Porsche has won the J.D. Power new-model satisfaction award more than any other car maker, the Germany company is expected to win next year,too.
Rewritten sentence:
Porsche has won the J.D. Power new-model satisfaction award more than any other car maker. The Germany company is expected to win next year, too.
Splice:
The federal Bureau of Safety and Environmental Enforcement is developing new regulations for offshore oil and gas operations in the Arctic, these regulations are expected to be ready for review later this year.
Rewritten sentence:
The Federal Bureau of Safety and Environmental Enforcement is developing new regulations for offshore oil and gas operations in the Arctic, and these regulations are expected to be ready for review later this year.
